ext_25882: (Bird Barn Owl)
nightdog_barks ([identity profile] nightdog-barks.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rubyjuly 2009-04-13 11:47 pm (UTC)

So, so pleased to see another story from you. Excellent read -- this line especially:

He sways, holding one of those big hands in his, hip to hip with a man he's known less than a day, and sees the sliver of blue, bright as a macaw's feathers, of House's eye when he looks upward.

Such a gorgeous simile. Terrific work!

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