So, so pleased to see another story from you. Excellent read -- this line especially:
He sways, holding one of those big hands in his, hip to hip with a man he's known less than a day, and sees the sliver of blue, bright as a macaw's feathers, of House's eye when he looks upward.
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He sways, holding one of those big hands in his, hip to hip with a man he's known less than a day, and sees the sliver of blue, bright as a macaw's feathers, of House's eye when he looks upward.
Such a gorgeous simile. Terrific work!