nightdog_barks (
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2009-04-06 03:17 am (UTC)
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This is really,
really
good. Great sense of place, vivid writing, and this line:
... and that's how it is now in this narrow bed with a stranger who knows about his brother and kissed him without any pity.
Just works so very well. I'd love to see more from you. :-)
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... and that's how it is now in this narrow bed with a stranger who knows about his brother and kissed him without any pity.
Just works so very well. I'd love to see more from you. :-)