ext_19772 ([identity profile] deelaundry.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rubyjuly 2009-04-06 04:25 am (UTC)

Wonderful! Beautiful imagery, but I think this is my favorite:

"I'm sorry," he says. "Today hasn't been a good day for him."

It hasn't been a good day for Wilson either and maybe Jay knows that. "My shift's over in twenty minutes. Let me buy you a drink," he offers.


Very nicely done.

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